The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/17
Well said!
02/14/17
I remember trying to establish a daily time to spend with God. It was aggregating because you really want to...but trying to start a new habit while changing old ones seem impossible. I've figured out my pattern.

Thank for you sharing...it is a good reminder for those who may be struggling with the same issue that is okay.
This is a great story. I like how you introduced the conflict right away. It kept me interested and wager to read. My main red ink would be don't give the ending away with the title. I love that last line, it was really powerful, but having it as a title shows the resolution. I think you did a great job of writing on topic while delivering a great message. Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level. Happy Dance!