The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/17
Excellent poem with a great message!
02/08/17
Superb! As I have previously stated in other pieces, I am not qualified to critique poetry. But, I would vote this a winner. It doesn't take me long to decide if I like a piece or not. I liked yours a lot. It was filled with great words of wisdom and scriptural messages without a bunch of "just rhyming". I look forward to future works of yours and may ask you for some help in writing some poetry. I have written some silly ones just for fun. Thanks for a great piece.
I love this. Poetry is not my favorite genre, but this piece is my favorite so far this week. I love your honesty. I can't imagine a reader not being able to relate to this. I also enjoyed your delightful sense of humor. You have a strong message in these verses.
02/09/17
Congratulations on your 1st place Advance ranking! Others have already reviewed your piece perfectly, and said it way better than I could. Well done.
02/09/17
Congratulations! God bless.
02/09/17
I felt sure your poem was the winner right away, Lisa. Congratulations on the great writing and addressing the topic so well. Great job.
02/10/17
Congrats on your powerful piece! Well done and well deserved.
Blessings~
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 11th overall. This truly was one of my all time favorites so I am doing a happy Dance for you!
04/13/17
Fabulous bit of word-smithing my dear. Congratulations on your level win.