The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/05
This is the kind of true story that warms the heart and cleanses the tear ducts at the same time! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
Blessings, Lynda
A great story, made better because it was based on a true experience. Nothing is better than life - not even our imagination! It brought tears to my eyes and joy to my heart. A blessing to read.
02/16/05
I would have like to see more of jay's decision making in the process. It seemed such a jump from Jay prying about his decision to "I've come to take you home." Otherwise, great story telling.
02/21/05
Awesome work Glenn. Touched the heart so it did.