The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/06
I love the title! Great use of irony. Nice writing!
01/16/06
I really like the way you wrote this. Very thought-provoking. Needs a little polish here and there with some puncuation, but the content is great. I liked the title too. Well done. :)
I could feel the tormentor's syrupy voice! Good job. Favorite line: "He doesn’t control me. He has given me freedom and life which is what you promised and could never deliver."