The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the concept of corporate intrigue.
Sadly, the word limit makes it difficult to incorporate so many characters in such a short story without making it difficult for at least this reader to keep up.
I really like your title. It drew me back for a second read to try and follo your action-packed story.
You did a nice job of packing a lot of drama in so few words. There's a great message here too. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. Happy Dance!