The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/16
This is a great story which may resonate deeply with many parents who have strong willed, rebellious teenagers. I am not altogether certain that fussy was the theme that was prominent in this story. However, I am not the judge. Thank you for sharing this piece.
I feel this is the "pride of life" that many today are deceived by and do not repent of causing them to be responsible for their own actions. This is a well written story known by many fathers of today's world.