The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is a powerful piece. I can feel the pain of the MC. Fear is so overwhelming and such a complex emotion. You capture it well. You also show the only real answer is handing that fear over to God, but that in itself is scary too. Powerful poetry.
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