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This is a compelling story. I often wonder if I would be able to handle situations with the same faith and courage of others. But God knows what we can handle, what will make us stronger or what will break us.

My red ink is little. Frostbite is one word. I also noticed the story switched voices a bit. It started with first person plural, then went into Mark's story, then first person singular and then plural again. Even when telling Mark's story, by putting bits of your insight into the story, it might help keep the voice consistent.

I think you were spot on topic. You touched on it in more ways than one too, which is quite clever. Your message is a great one and comes out clearly. The story ended on a positive note and will make me stop and think.
11/07/16
An interesting story with a good message. I enjoyed this.
11/08/16
This is so well written. Along with a wonderfully told story, you showed the spiritual truth and how it applies at the end. Great job!
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