The Official Writing Challenge
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Your entry is truly creative with the topic. I like the back and forth of the story and the study.

One little thing that I might have missed: When the mother and little girl walked away, what happened to the little brother? I'm imagining he went along as well. :)

Clever writing technique and quite unique.
This is a lovely devotion with some great messages. I liked how you wove the story of the little girl into the message. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level 19 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.