The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/16
Creative take on this topic! Sounds like a computer that needs some rest and repair! :) I didn't get the "alternate dwelling area." Was that a part of the house or somewhere else?
10/16/16
This is a very clever and humorous piece of writing. Good on you for looking at this theme from an IT perspective and writing to suit that mode.
That was almost hard to read but not to understand.

This piece either came quickly or you had to put a lot of extra time in on it to get it to sound like you wanted it to sound.

Interesting. Now, how are you going to use this type of writing. If not for you, it may be for someone yet to come and say of your work, "That's how I want to write".
10/20/16
Humorous way the brain categorizes stimuli.
10/20/16
Congratulations Lisa for receiving Highly Commended!
Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 14 overall. Happy Dance!