The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
This story certainly made me want to read to the end--I wanted to find out what happened. I also wanted to know more about the escape: where did you go? what did you do?
01/11/06
Wow! I want more! Good job!
01/12/06
Yes, I'd like to know how you made the escape and to where. You can work this into a longer story. I really enjoyed it
01/12/06
Great story and I liked your style. It read well and kept me intrigued. I wanted to know more about how their relationship continued after that.
01/12/06
This was very readable and well written. An economy of words. Amelia Jane's story is only too relevant in the world today. Thanks for writing.
01/12/06
And then.....? I am waiting with baited breath for what happened next! Very well written, very entertaining and extremely addictive, as in "wanting more"! Well done!
01/13/06
This was great! Unusual style--I liked it.
01/14/06
Your first sentence caught me and the story pulled me right on until the end. I too wanted to know more! Good writing!
01/15/06
A true-to-life discussion from the viewpoint of one who dared to investigate and offer compassion. Good lesson!!
01/17/06
Great way of handling a sensitive issue. Loved your style. So real and heart-wrenching. And yes, I'm waiting with baited breath to see what happens next. Well done.