The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/16
I enjoyed this story and the relation between trusting people and trusting God. However, I'm not sure why the second paragraph ended with that it was disconcerting? Not sure why that would be. Other than that, Good job.
08/02/16
I think you should have stuck with your first thought - Lillie's tomatoes. You could have really fleshed out that and had a good devotional. That's the hard part, to delete and rethink. I would have loved to learn more about the mother and daughter. <3