The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/16
I can empathize with the MCs struggles and feelings of worthlessness. You painted a picture of the bondage that others can hold on a person. You conveyed this very well. I was happy when the MC discovered for herself the root cause of the problems in life. Your ending had me wondering if the MC moved away.
08/03/16
Good story about trusting yourself instead of relying on other opinions. I think maybe more of a reference to "trust" could apply more to the topic, even though that theme ran though the whole story. I wasn't sure the husband actually left in the beginning, or someone else. This story made you think of possible other endings...a sign of good writing.
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