The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/16
I thoroughly enjoyed your story which was uplifting, soul and spirit. You did a good using Lynda’s dialogue with Tim to bring in the gathering of the family of God.
07/25/16
One more thing- Your title is perfect!
07/26/16
Wonderfully on topic! And a delight to read. I could feel your MC's excitement and anticipation.
07/27/16
Nice story. Very much on topic. Keep writing.
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