The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/16
Creative use of the topic word. I thought the story flowed well. It was also easy on the eyes because your paragraphs weren’t overly long. I personally didn’t need the separator at the end to show the time change. “Now I sit here alone” made it clear to me that we were back in the present.
How will USA Fall? Here is another manner that is possible. The only way out is for God's people to repent and turn back to his ways.(Bible ways so strict that "Christians" of today say to God's word, "He doesn't really mean what it says".

We need something like this from time to time to help us check up on ourselves.
07/26/16
You gave me plenty to think about in your well written entry. Thanks for sharing.
07/27/16
Sitting in front of my TV in Australia watching the news and the continuing saga of Trump and Clinton, I can only say GOD HELP AMERICA!!!