The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/16
Very creative. I enjoyed remembering all those songs. A couple of minor red ink items. In para 4, she doesn't need an apostrophe. And Lesley ... wants too - should only be one "o". Like I said, minor issues.
06/20/16
A delightfully original and entertaining (though melancholy) trip down down lonely street with some gone-but-not-forgotten favorites. Nice job!
06/20/16
I forgot to say... I loved the touch of humor woven throughout..and the ending was awesomely witty.
06/23/16
Congrats!

BLessings~
06/23/16
Congrats on First Place. I loved it!
06/23/16
Congratulations, Harriet, on placing 1st place in the Intermediate category and 9th place overall.

I'm glad as a Christian I can leave all my heartbreak at Jesus' feet.
06/23/16
Congratulations on your EC - and thanks for reminding us of all those songs. Great job.
06/23/16
Congratulations on your EC!!!
06/24/16
Congratulations, Harriet, on your EC. I knew most of the songs you referred to - heartbreak is a frequent theme! Well done with this.
I loved this! Being a music lover and performer I could really relate LOL and such a unique approach to the topic! Congrats on 1st place!
06/25/16
Congratulations on 1st Place Advanced and 9th Place EC!
07/07/16
Delightful entry with a message my dear. Congratulations on your level win.
07/12/16
I spent 20 years singing those good old songs so I have to make one correction....Tony Bennett sang I left my heart in San Francisco not ole' blue eyes. Otherwise, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.