The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/16
Current events at their worst. I had a couple of small red ink issues. In para. 4, I think country should be world. And I forgot which paragraph, but business's should be businesses. Minor corrections.
I so fee your heartache and outrage! Your emotions come through loud and clear and I think all of God's children will agree. Your essay could use some editing for minor errors and tightening, but you are well on your way to being a great writer. Thank you for speaking my heart, and I think that of our Lord, so powerfully. <3
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 16 overall. Happy Dance.
06/25/16
Congratulations on 3rd Place!