The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/16
Very well written.
06/20/16
This is a good telling of an amazing story but it sounds detached with little emotion or sensory statements that puts the reader in the moment. I did like the suspense and you hit the topic well.
This is a powerful story dull of action and suspense.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 11th overall. Happy Dance!
Congrats on 2nd place Pat and well deserved!
06/25/16
Congratulations on 2nd Place!
06/30/16
Congratulations, Pat, on finishing 2nd in the Advanced division and 11th overall.

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