The Official Writing Challenge
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Facinating poem. It made me stop and think. I like it, good job!
Good imagery-Kept me reading!
01/14/06
This guys gonna be bummed when he gets outside and it's nighttime! lol! Kidding! I love the imagery and the message. Definately thought provoking. I think you repeated a word or two... but that's minor. Over all good work. Poetry ain't easy! lol!