The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/16
A very nice conversation between friends. It seemed to be working to draw her to Christ. Peace and trust in God is a very good witness.

Enjoyed your writing. God bless!
06/10/16
Very good dialogue and subject matter. I thought your point was explained well through their conversation. Nice job!
This is a lovely casual chat around the table that drew me in right away. I loved the juxtaposition of the two moms. I know I worry too much too. You did a nice job of developing the conflict, and the characters felt real. Your dialog moved the story ahead nicely and delivered your message without coming off as too preachy. Great job.