The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This is powerful and broke my heart. It does seem to be an epidemic. Although you had a few minor punctuation errors (commas before and that weren't separating series or two sentences that could stand on their own and a missing question mark), it didn't distract from the intensity of the piece. I think you nailed the topic in a fresh and powerful way. It broke my heart because I can see the truth in it.
06/15/16
Perfect title. So sad that this is the mindset of many young people today with no sense of worth. Great job on this.
06/16/16
Congratulations Lisa on your win! Your entry really stands out in my mind. Thank you for sharing your gift.
06/16/16
Congratulations, Lisa, on your highly commended entry in the Advanced category this week.

This story is sad but true.