The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/16
very interesting! It needs paragraphing, and space between the paragraphs. I thought it was barely on topic even though I did enjoy it.
06/12/16
The only UFO's I have seen are the un-finished objects in my sewing basket. An interesting slant on the topic. Well done.
06/13/16
I really like your opening hook. Very creative.
06/14/16
I see I had a comment on lack of paragraphing. It was there. I copied and pasted my entry, but the paragraphing on my copy did not come through correctly. I will watch that next time. Thank you members.