The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/06
Good try. Microsoft student is on sale right now and has Word on it, which should clear up most of your errors (sentence structure, tense usage and verb usage). I look forward to reading your work when it is less difficult to read.
This was a little preachy for me. I think you have a good message here...keep working on it.
Good information here; perhaps it would help the reader to personalize it with real-life examples. Thank you sharing your heart, and your desire to expose the truth.