The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. You had me grinning, laughing and even snorting. The pacing was perfect. In my humble opinion, (I could be totally wrong), I think one of the reasons it didn't do better was because it didn't nail the topic. You touched on it, but the whole article wasn't about finish. Keep writing though because you have a brilliant way with words. This really brightened my day.