The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm not comfortable critiquing poetry but I completely agree with the concluding stanza. Well done, I'd say.
05/27/16
Nice poem...great thought provoking words. Good job.
05/31/16
Great job with this!

Blessings~
06/01/16
A poem that speaks truth and softly convicts, I like it a lot.