The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
Thank God for the last paragraph...dramatic.
Okay it took me a minute but I think I got it-God was the man wanting in, right? This piece made me think and reread...at first I thought it was an affair which I think you intended but the last sentence rounded it out. Intriguing!
Interesting!
hmmmmm, thought provoking
This one tugged at me...b/c of the reality of being pursued...I just needed a little more development to make everything flow together. Glad to know God was the One to show up. :-)