The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/16
This is superb. It had me hooked from the first sentence and held me till the end. Well Done! Great Story!
05/26/16
excellent!

Blessings~
05/26/16
Congratulations Pat! I knew this was a winner.
05/26/16
Congratulations, Pat, on your 3rd place finish in the Advanced Category.

I enjoy reading your stories and your comments each week.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 13 overall. Happy Dance!