The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
This was well written and I was interested from start to finish.

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04/26/16
I really enjoyed the variety of examples you used. One suggestion I have is to tighten up your writing by using less words to make your points. Other than that, I thought this was very good.
04/28/16
Congrats!

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04/28/16
Congrats!

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04/30/16
Congratulations, Pat, on your well deserved EC award. You used excellent examples of temptation.
05/15/16
Your Swedish proverb title drew me in and your life-story examples kept my interest till the end. Nicely conceived and written.