The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
Fantastic job with this!

Blessings~
04/21/16
Great devotional thoughts.
04/26/16
I loved how you used the many sayings we say in life that refer to gambling. And I enjoyed your casual, matter of fact way of writing. The only red ink suggestion I have is to perhaps simplify your message at the end. Up to the last paragraph you were clear and concise. But then the last part when you wrote, " vs. my behaving like the world, doing whatever I want to, only to find out I had been right in the first place?” seemed just a little confusing. Overall I thought this was very good.