The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/16
I just read this passage from the Bible. You captured the heart of it well.
03/17/16
That was a good account. My only red ink: next to last paragraph, should children be child (first born child)?
03/21/16
Masterfully written!

Loved it...

Blessings~