The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 164 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
03/10/16
I liked this a lot,maybe because I can identify so much with the feelings expressed. I think it was very emotive.
03/10/16
This piece was well written. It conjured up the picture of the labyrinth of life and the decisions the MC made along the way.
03/11/16
So well done and completely on topic!

Nice job...

Blessings~
Lovely allegory. I might have done something different with the title, perhaps including labyrinth, but that is not significant. I hope this does well.
03/14/16
I too, identify with this. It's a lovely account of an experience that is UNlovely to be in.
In critique, I wonder if para five was necessary? Keeping me, the reader, somewhat removed from your personal details worked really well, and sharing that small bit intruded slightly on a private reflection.
Minor though. It was great.
I really enjoyed this entry. I could feel the MC's battles and you portrayed a Biblical truth for all of us.
Good luck in the challenge.