The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/16
I really enjoyed this poem! Great job touching on the various stages of life!
03/03/16
Beautiful poem on life's journey. It had great rhythm and flow.
03/04/16
Excellent!
Blessings~
03/05/16
I really like this poem. You have summed up our stories in a creative way.

I was wondering if the second to last line would flow better as "It isn't how our story begins"? Just a suggestion. Blessings, LaVonne
Absolutely beautiful! Great job
03/09/16
A nice poem, thanks.