The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm not a sci-fi fan, but this definitely held my interest! Thanks for the diversion...and thought-provoking ending.
I am also not into Sci-Fi, however I'm sure alot of work went into this piece - and probably would be a Good Read in A Sci-Fi magazine! Thanks for sharing.
Very good. It's difficult to create a great sci-fi story in 750 words without it feeling hollow because you have the real challenge of painting a whole new world and then also getting your message across.

Take the time and expand this. I think it can be better once it is beyond the word count limitation.

Continue to write what you enjoy! But it is my impression that sci-fi is at a disadvantage in the weekly challenge.