The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/16
Great story and the end made me smile really wide!

God bless~
01/30/16
I gather that the MC here is an oven? Very interesting concept, but it's a bit confusing in some places. You have a unique imagination. Keep writing.
God Bless
01/31/16
Very creative take on the topic this week. It made my mouth water for cupcakes or muffins. Fun read.

You had some spacing problems throughout the story. Also, I don't think your concept was clearly communicated.
Your beginning had me intrigued. A very unique take on the topic!
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 21 overall! Happy Dance!
02/05/16
I loved your take on the subject! Very creative!