The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story and the end made me smile really wide!

God bless~
I gather that the MC here is an oven? Very interesting concept, but it's a bit confusing in some places. You have a unique imagination. Keep writing.
God Bless
Very creative take on the topic this week. It made my mouth water for cupcakes or muffins. Fun read.

You had some spacing problems throughout the story. Also, I don't think your concept was clearly communicated.
Your beginning had me intrigued. A very unique take on the topic!
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 21 overall! Happy Dance!
I loved your take on the subject! Very creative!