The Official Writing Challenge
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Heart-rending and yet in the end redeeming. I liked reading this. You kept it moving along, and the spacing was helpful.
Awww...I loved this!
Uplifting and hope filled ending.

God bless~
Great story. I liked the simplicity of it - like your statement about forgiveness.

And then the thoughts about the MC's mother. I liked how you brought the story around to that with the birth of the MC's own child.

Very well written ... the whole concept.

God bless!
Nice story showing that forgiveness is possible when we have a personal relationship with Jesus.