The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/16
Heart-rending and yet in the end redeeming. I liked reading this. You kept it moving along, and the spacing was helpful.
01/27/16
Awww...I loved this!
Uplifting and hope filled ending.

God bless~
Great story. I liked the simplicity of it - like your statement about forgiveness.

And then the thoughts about the MC's mother. I liked how you brought the story around to that with the birth of the MC's own child.

Very well written ... the whole concept.

God bless!
01/30/16
Nice story showing that forgiveness is possible when we have a personal relationship with Jesus.