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01/21/16
It sounds like Dorothy was severely depressed. I believe she needed prayer and encouragement, but I don't necessarily believe it was a demonic attack. Like Job, we can go through many trials, but God never blamed him like his friends did.
01/24/16
Interesting article. It was good to have a lot of dialogue. You definitely need white space between the paragraphs to make it easier to read.
01/27/16
Good job!
Well written,

God bless~
01/30/16
I can relate to your story very well as I went through a spiritual attack myself. Mentally I was a mess. At the beginning of it, I didn't have Christian friends lifting me up in prayer. It was only after I returned to church and was back among believers who started praying for me that I got victory over the attack. It is something that I never want to go through again...ever!

Critique- It would be easier to read your story if it was formatted into paragraphs and there was some spacing.