The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/16
This is a very daring attempt at a POV. It's captivating. Makes me wonder what really went through Paul's mind. Good job and God bless.
01/22/16
I find it quite a challenge to retell a very familiar narrative & keep it interesting. I think you've done nobly w/ it. It's well written & moved along nicely. I did notice a typo or 2. One I recall was "known" when it probably should have been "knew." Good job w/ the piece.
01/26/16
I liked the POV you chose. It really felt like I could read Paul's thoughts.

Well done.
01/27/16
An excellent job with this!

God bless~
01/30/16
As we often experience a myriad of emotions when God calls to us, it would be nice to be able to actually have insight into the deeper thoughts of various Bible characters to help us realize that we are not alone in our struggles.

You did a good job of helping me envision more of what Saul/Paul may have been thinking and going through.

I have yet to try a POV piece like this. I might just have to give it a try.