The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/15
It's so easy to lose your temper and explode, but I'm glad you saw what an error that would be.
12/12/15
Thanks for sharing an important message.

WEll done.

God bless~
12/16/15
This is very well done. Your dialog feels relaxed and natural, and your narrative is true to your own voice. In addition, you've used the object lesson of the pressure cooker very effectively. The addition of small details like peeling the polish off your fingernails gives additional authenticity to the piece.

In fact, I can't find anything to 'red ink' here. I enjoyed this entry very much.
12/16/15
I assume you went to the mission field as planned. I read different authors from time to time and more often than not, I end up returning them without finishing because of foul language or sexual content. You truly cannot judge all books by their covers...all people either.

Thanks for this well written and personal view into your life.
Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 18 overall! Happy Dance!