The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/05
A wonderful story. Well told! For me, it had to do with our differences and not being inclined to sway our opinions of ourselves based on others' opinions. We are all made to be the beauifully unique versions of God's child that He has in mind for us to be, not to be led astray by ignorance of others, ignorance of self, or errant desires. Thank you for the message and the insight.
12/12/05
Beautiful story, and insight. A delight to read. I only noticed a few typos, you probably have already. This is a good message for many people to be strengthened in the will of the Lord, in his time and according to his purpose. God bless ya, littlelight
This obviously would be a great devotional or Sunday School lesson for children, and yet it touches all ages with its pure and simple wisdom. Thanks for the encouragement!!
12/19/05
A well organised homily. The last paragraph needs more work though so that it isn't repetative and doesn't come across as patronising. Yeggy
A big THANK-YOU to all those people who added their valuable points of view to my challenge aricle. Correction is not rejection!!! - and I thank you kindly for your critiques. God bless you real good in Jesus Christ's faithful and loving name .