The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/15
Downsizing a "lifetime" can be quite a challenge. Change is never easy. Nice story.
11/13/15
Great job with the descriptions, attention to detail, and character development! It was fun to see the progression of thoughts from objects representing treasure to people and relationships being the treasure.
11/16/15
This is an AWWWW story and impeccably written.

I thoroughly enjoyed it.

God Bless!