The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/05
A beautiful story with far-reaching inspiration. Thank you.
12/12/05
This is a great reminder that as Christians our tongues can bring life or death so easily. This is beautiful!
This is awesome! I wish there were a sequel so I can see if I am right about the patient recovering and going on to live a fruitful life...at least that's how I am choosing to see it. Thanks for a heart-warming story!
12/14/05
Beautiful! I love the way you tied in trees - both the physical and the metaphorical. EXCELLENT work!
Nicely done! Allusions to healing and growth and maturity are well developed.
12/17/05
Excellent verse you chose. Given the word count I think you fit it all in really well. Dialogue was great. Well done! :) Karen
12/19/05
Great dialogue really made this piece live for me. Yeggy.