The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/15
Awww! I LOVED IT!
so uplifting and sweet.

God bless~
09/03/15
Nice story of paying it forward. Nice work.
09/04/15
This was lovely. You hooked me in and keep my attention right through to the end. And what an appropriate and delightful conclusion. Well done you!
09/10/15
The acts of kindness your MC displayed in honor of his mom had me crying.

What a precious entry. Well done and congratulations on your well deserved win!
09/10/15
This story is well developed and very well written! I can definitely see why you placed first (instead of me:)). Congratulations on your win in advanced and your EC...it's well deserved!
09/10/15
Heyyy - what a terrific story of generosity and grace! There is so much depth of feeling, and I loved that ending - or was it just a pregnant pause?
Congratulations on your placing.
09/10/15
Congrats, Cindy, on your 3rd place EC. Well deserved for this sweet story so well told.
This was a very rich piece. I was touched by Josh's devotion to his mother. The ending was brilliant and unpredictable. Congrats on you high EC place!
This was so beautiful, and I thought your ending was amazing. Congratulations on your EC!