The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/15
Beautifully written! I was intrigued from beginning to end and it was so moving that I thought it was a true event. Your article can bless many lives it's so true in it's meaning. Wow! God speaks!
If I were judging; you'd be a winner! Keep up the great work!
Live blessed!
08/29/15
Powerfully written. This entry was inspirational and on topic with an important message that resonates throughout the entire entry.

Well done!

God bless~
I was drawn into this story from the very beginning. The simple conversation illuminated a great life lesson. I thought it was easy to read and understand. I loved it.
08/31/15
Grandpa Jenkins was a very multi-faceted MC. It was interesting to see life through his eyes. You made several important points without seeming preachy.
09/03/15
Congrats
God bless~
09/03/15
Congratulations on your 2nd place award in Advanced, Cindy!

Your strong character development was impressive.
09/03/15
Congratulations on your 9th place EC award.
Cindy, Congratulations on your EC Award. This was a moving and touching story. I liked how you approached tourist trap from a different angle.