The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/15
Congratulations on your 2nd place award in the Advanced category!

I must admit I'm a little over my head in the water since I can't swim.
08/27/15
Congratulations on your win! This is an interesting story. I especially like the "side notes" like with the flogger game that made it much more vivid to imagine.
08/29/15
Your story was so real I was surprised at the 'fiction' note at the end. You made it seem as if you were there. And bustophobia haha!
08/30/15
Congratulations on your EC! I really enjoyed your story. Glad the MC was overcoming some of her fears by the end. Well done.
09/03/15
Congrats!
God bless~