The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/15
This is excellent for its scope and its sensitivity in an area where the gentle power of God's grace can sometimes be hidden behind promises that may sound like cliches - until his grace anoints them. Congratulations also, on your rise through the ranks - which shows every sign of continuing further.
Definitely time to move up. You made the transition excellently. The characters were real and the story, interesting --and right on topic.
This is a lovely piece. I loved the dialog. It really developed the characters. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!