The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Boo hoo!! I really enjoyed reading this! You pictured this couple's memories so vividly! Made me think of my own husband and myself when we remember back. Thank you!
12/06/05
What a sweet, gentle story.
12/06/05
What lovely memories to live by. I enjoyed the way you wove the memories into a simple, everyday pleasure.
12/07/05
A soft and gentle well-written story. I enjoyed it very much.
12/07/05
Very sweet, and your transition to the flashback was flawless. Bravo!
Wow this was beautiful. The transition to the past was handled so well - and creative too. Well done.
12/10/05
Flawless! Excellent writing! This has got to be up there when the Merit Badges are passed out! An ordinary couple doing nothing but drinking coffee has been made to look like a Broadway Bonanza HIT...by describing, depicting and telling such a Real Life story of April love that has lasted through December. A Masterpiece! Kudos! Kudos! Kudos!
A sweet story that reminded me of my in-laws' experience. They, too, loved "Apple Blossom Time." :-)