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Boo hoo!! I really enjoyed reading this! You pictured this couple's memories so vividly! Made me think of my own husband and myself when we remember back. Thank you!
What a sweet, gentle story.
What lovely memories to live by. I enjoyed the way you wove the memories into a simple, everyday pleasure.
A soft and gentle well-written story. I enjoyed it very much.
Very sweet, and your transition to the flashback was flawless. Bravo!
Wow this was beautiful. The transition to the past was handled so well - and creative too. Well done.
Flawless! Excellent writing! This has got to be up there when the Merit Badges are passed out! An ordinary couple doing nothing but drinking coffee has been made to look like a Broadway Bonanza describing, depicting and telling such a Real Life story of April love that has lasted through December. A Masterpiece! Kudos! Kudos! Kudos!
A sweet story that reminded me of my in-laws' experience. They, too, loved "Apple Blossom Time." :-)