The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/15
We feel the woman's pain in this gut wrenching story. Good job - hope you do well in the Challenge.
05/19/15
I like this. You had me wondering what was going on the first time she cried out "Take my mind!"

A small formatting note: It's best to put thoughts in italics. Most people are familiar enough with that format, and then you don't have to say "She thought."

Nice job with this.