The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/15
I love the honesty and humility of these fine piece of writing. It was heartfelt, and the sense of yearning for heaven when all is made clear is evident.
05/19/15
Great job with this.

The wording is a bit awkward in places, but it still works overall.

Nice job. And yes, I'm grateful God doesn't give up on us.