The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/15
Wow- that was a highly graphic and intense read, and a summation of that which is going on in the world right now which made it all the more jarring.

This certainly nailed the topic and more.

God bless~
04/17/15
Frightening. Thanks for all your hard work. Best of luck in the Challenge!
04/19/15
Powerful story and so true. Just this last week there was news story about Christians in the Middle East being thrown overboard off a some ships. You presented a gripping story. Well crafted and written.
04/20/15
Oh, this was gripping. Beautifully written and expressed and gave me cold chills. How can men be so evil? How can they receive joy in their depraved hearts while doing such a thing?

And they do it in the name of their God.

This is just excellent and should do well in the challenge.
04/20/15
Wow, I agree with the others - you nailed this one. Gripping and intense; the type of story that grabs you and will not let you go. This is not one that will be soon forgotten.
04/21/15
Powerful. Gripping.Frightening.
Your story pulled me in and still hasn't let go. Great job!