The Official Writing Challenge
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Your artist's palette of words has also be well used here - your descriptions are lovely.
Very descriptive without being too wordy. Good job! Two little things--If the opening sentence is a quote, either italicize it, or put it in quotation marks. At first, I thought it was a long title, and then your name. Also, you introduced a "me" into the second paragraph, but nowhere else. Consider a rewrite of that sentence.

A lovely word picture.
Lovely descriptive piece. Loved the picture you painted.God Bless.
Lovely description. I like this quote!! And your commentary on it!